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If I Were A Poet
Contributed by
brigitte7735
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:51:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I were a Poet, I'd master emotion's tongue
Give breath to tears' nature, and the pain from which they hung
Immortalize spirit, whilst trying to save my own
Ignite a wasted world, whose characters turn to stone
If I were a Painter, I'd paint the world like Renoir
Colors bleeding beauty, form a face time cannot mar
Preserved in it's scandal, a Parisian theatre stage
Sprinkled with vanilla, a picture captures a page
If I were a Dancer, I'd gracefully graze the sky
Suspended in the air, cradled by a Swan Lake's cry
Masterpiece of music, accompanies pointed toes
A ballad in motion, lifted legs transformed to prose
If I were a Singer, of an operatic type
My call would baptize you, and pluck you when you're ripe
As your gothic ideal, finally be your girl of choice
Bask in obeisance, men turned to slaves by my voice
If I were a Lady, I'd make you forget the whore
Lost in seas of costume, engaged in clevor rapport
A dance card always full, as they clamor for my hand
Ancient customs frozen, celebration of the grande
If I were anything...anything but what I am
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brigitte7735
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:07:39 AM AEST
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You captured this so well.
And you discribe so much.
greta write. |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:15:08 AM AEST
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Great images.
As a poet,I'm always my own worst enemy.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smiles, poets,
emy |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:32:16 AM AEST
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Very nice write.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:38:11 AM AEST
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You have your own talent, Bridgette... no need to envy others..You are most definiately a poet at heart...
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
Jenni |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 03:12:24 AM AEST
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| beautiful, how alot of us feel |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:44:12 AM AEST
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This, I can relate to - feelings of inferiority in the past, coupled with a strident sense of aspiration . . . you describe it very well, Vanessa.
Thanks for posting - its been a while! |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 07:04:47 PM AEST
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"If I were anything...anything but what I am"...
Words I understand ~ And wish I didn't. It seems to me, that you my friend, are most certainly a poet... Great work of art.
J~ |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Stitch on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:27:21 PM AEST
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Goodness, this put a lump in my throat.
Well done.
Stitch |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:00:39 PM AEST
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A brilliant construction.
Good stuff!
Very thoughtful.
--Mothy |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 09:48:02 PM AEST
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If I were a publisher..I would sign you up in a heartbeat. This is more that just a great write...it is one that has a permanent value.
Very very well done
( Tosses roses)
Larry |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:37:04 AM AEST
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I am so glad that I found this! I absolutely love this!!
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!! You nailed it. Perfectly fabulous!!!!!!
Geez Vanessa.... superb.
SNM |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:02:38 AM AEST
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*completely agrees with Larry*
A very inspiration write.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: If I Were A Poet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th June 2012 @ 01:04:55 AM AEST
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Ah, sarcasm. I love sarcasm and this poem!!! Excellent writing!
Some fantastic lines but this one? This one is my favorite.
My call would baptize you, and pluck you when you're ripe
Thank you for excellence!
Tim |
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