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My Favorite Demon
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:39:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The demon
He haunts me in my dreams
My favorite demon
Leaves me bleeding on my knees
Always scheming
Plotting away my demise
My favorite demon
Doesn't listen to my cries
Feelings weaken
My body growing numb
I hear him speaking
My child look at what you've done
But how I love him
When he haunts me in my dreams
My favorite demon
Always brings me to my knees
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Re: My Favorite Demon
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:41:16 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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Re: My Favorite Demon
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:45:04 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem, very vivid, emotions a plenty a well worth read. |
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Re: My Favorite Demon
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 03:18:57 AM AEST
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| haunting |
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Re: My Favorite Demon
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by Firestarter1038 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:54:04 AM AEST
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| Wow Great Poem! Its so dark, and the persona in the poem seems to love this 'demon' even though he just hurts her/him. Sounds like many of my Friends relationships, Though the meaning of the poem could be different , a bad relationship is what comes to my mind. Once again, great write! |
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Re: My Favorite Demon
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:07:37 PM AEST
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| Marvellous as always, very erie and haunting, I know what ur talking about, my back cabins haunted and I reside in it for the summer evenings lol Anyways great job! |
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