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In a Corner
Contributed by
jt
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:56:36 PM in AEST
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I have become the tangled mess
The unfinished task tossed into the corner
to be forgotten
No matter how I try
I cant piece back together
this broken jigsaw puzzle that refuses to be
This puzzle that was once so easy
but now laughs in my face
Laughing louder the more you forget
And you do
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jt
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2004-09-10 22:56:36]
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Re: In a Corner
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:47:30 PM AEST
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excellent write. something peculiar about it in the ending that makes it amazing and my favorite part. "Laughing louder the more you forget/And you do"
sometimes when the pieces dont fit you just have to start another puzzle because wasting your life because you never quit isnt worth it. |
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Re: In a Corner
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:27:52 AM AEST
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I can remember when I felt the same way but God spoke to me and said, "There's healing in this broken mirror."
He assured me he wouldn't leave me alone, that he w3ould be right there and he's never left me and the puzzle peices come together in God's timeing.
Sad but great writing.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
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Re: In a Corner
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 03:39:24 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: In a Corner
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by monkeykh1313 on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 07:56:05 PM AEST
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| Amazing. |
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