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As the world goes Wrong
Contributed by
jt
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:44:47 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I sit with head in hands
Peering through fingers at a world gone wrong
Like a child told not to look
Staring at images that dont belong
Though the storm clouds move fast
There’s no sign of blue sky to break the grey
And still I sit here watching
Unable to close eyes and turn away
Television reports
More bad news of hate, rape, killing and war
New deseases without cure
I sit wondering what I’m watching for
My head is in a spin
Listening to world leaders, politics
Even religous leaders
Calling for holy wars. It makes me sick.
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jt
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2004-09-10 22:44:47]
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Re: As the world goes Wrong
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:49:04 PM AEST
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Awesome masterpeice.
Sad but well said.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: As the world goes Wrong
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:53:52 PM AEST
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| hear, hear. excellent write. i feel more sickened with all you discussed more than i did before. |
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Re: As the world goes Wrong
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:35:56 PM AEST
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Very strong poem, and the subject is an excellent one, so much on the news goes into strife, it makes watching tv very crappy indeed.
Awesome one.
~Silence~ |
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Re: As the world goes Wrong
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:51:27 AM AEST
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It is the truth and so very sad, mother against father, leaving the children to cry and never to know the reasons why.
Nice to have a haven like this, where it seems simular souls gather from around the world, to share of themselves.
Thank you for sharing this. |
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Re: As the world goes Wrong
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 05:03:14 AM AEST
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it makes me feel too!
you've expressed your-self and feelings very well here!!!
it's a strong poem with amazing stlye!
5 stars!
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