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Silence
Contributed by
Firestarter1038
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:31:48 PM in AEST
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Silence
All I hear is silence,
Not a movement, not a sound,
All I hear I silence,
I'm afraid, Its all around,
All I see is darkness,
I cannot see a thing,
All there is is darkness,
Thats all my life can bring,
All I feel is fear,
Like a blanket wrapped to tight,
All I feel is the fear,
That i'll never find the light,
All I want is out,
An exit sign glowing red,
all I want is out,
How I wish I wan't dead.
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Re: Silence
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:42:47 PM AEST
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Beautfully composed, sounded like a song, a sad one, but an awsome write.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderous talent
~silence~ |
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Re: Silence
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:49:11 PM AEST
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Fascinating suject!!! Well presented... beautifully written...
What an awesome concept of death! Thank u for sharing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Silence
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by darkplaidbabe on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:51:30 PM AEST
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awesome write man! very well done, its short and sweet, good job. you might wanna check out my poem, AFRAID OF THE DARK. you can get it from my profile, thanks!!! keep up the good writing.
~lovelovelove~Brynna aka magenta |
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Re: Silence
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:22:42 PM AEST
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| very nice. i used to believe there was no afterlife either. but when i thought that you died, i thought you died. there was no thoughts and no feelings. you were basically a rock when dead. but things change. |
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Re: Silence
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:00:28 AM AEST
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That is a true mystery to what we all think what an after life is.Some believe theres a hell and some don't .
some believes theres a heaven we all go .
good write. |
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Re: Silence
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by toxicchubakka on
Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 09:00:44 AM AEST
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i know its metaphoric but i dont think a dead person could be afraid
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