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Forever Strong
Contributed by
PoeticMystery
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Learning to live
Learning to breathe
I am learning to go on without you hear with me
I never thought I could take a step forward without
You at my side..Baby, I thought I would die
Always questioned what I did before you
And thought if I ever lost you my strength would go away
But now I am learning day by day,
When I was with you I was never strong like I thought
Now I realize what a fighter I can be
Now you must open your eyes and see
I'm walking the other way, never looking back
Knowing I will love again, as a matter of fact
I cried for months thinking my life would never be the same
Thinking I lost everything good in it, what a shame
I gave up so many days I should of shown smiles
Walking in the shadow of my broken heart
But now I'ved walked through all those miles
I've faced all the trials
I'm back forever strong
Realizing so many times I was wrong
I have the strength to go on without you
Baby, You better believe I'm moving on too
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Re: Forever Strong
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:49:57 PM AEST
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A beautiful and positive write...
Jenni |
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Re: Forever Strong
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:57:04 PM AEST
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U GO!!!
This is a sad write on one hand and on the other it's a happy one! Beautifully written...
u've woke up and realized that there's more to life... and that ur srong enuff to go on and live on ur own...
Awesomw job... keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Forever Strong
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:29:29 PM AEST
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| inspirational write. im glad you have the strength to move on. as you have seen not doing it is the worse thing possible to do. |
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Re: Forever Strong
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by JT on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:35:50 PM AEST
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great write. good to see you got your feet back. good luck with the open road ahead.
-jt- |
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Re: Forever Strong
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:00:09 AM AEST
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Awesome!
It's always better ,looking back jus to realize how far you've come.
A masterpeice.
Hang tuff and great luck to u.
luv, huggs.
emy |
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