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DEADLY RUNNER
Contributed by
wellsmark
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Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
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DEADLY RUNNER
Silent engines running slow,
Inside the sub all hands are go.
A blip is heard on the radar screen,
Ship sir, destroyer load tubes two and three.
A torpedo away shouts the mate,
Lets leave the enemy to its burning fate.
Diving down to one hundred feet,
The ship explodes into a searing heat.
Submarine crew shout hurray,
Silent engines fade away.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
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2002-11-07 08:30:00]
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Re: DEADLY RUNNER
(User Rating: 1 )
by coolsmcniel on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 09:40:47 AM AEST
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| I like how this is something you dont always read about, its something you dont expect to hear about in a poem, but something, at the same time, enjoyable. Love it |
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Re: DEADLY RUNNER
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:38:48 PM AEST
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I agree with coolsmcniel it's
very different, somthing you dont
expect to read, Very well written
I want to read more
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: DEADLY RUNNER
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by wellsmark on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 05:56:34 PM AEST
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| Thanks for all your kind comments. |
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Re: DEADLY RUNNER
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:10:03 AM AEST
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| very creative and enjoyable to read. |
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