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Back to the Salt mines
Contributed by
Ark
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Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 06:10:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I find it hard to swallow moral quawrals of underaged girls.
I can create but yet i cannot destroy.
A strong man, a weak man, but, a man none the less.
Whos place is it to say which man is the best?
Life makes me unhappy but death would make so sad.
This world which i am damned to live in is driving me mad.
Tick tock in my mind as time goes by...and i qoute the saying "back to the salt mines"
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Re: Back to the Salt mines
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 03:04:29 PM AEST
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Hey, Ark. I to write lots of tragic, depressing, angry poems. I found this poem was ok, but I dont understand how it was tragic? I totally agree with 5th line I like it a lot and can relate to it. I found the rest of it confusing tho. keep up the poems! E-mail me if u want @ bobothefartingclown@yahoo.com |
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Re: Back to the Salt mines
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:06:27 AM AEST
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can be a tragic world in which we live, liked your poem short and yet straight to the point.
peace, love and happy poetry |
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Re: Back to the Salt mines
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by Ark on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:42:38 PM AEST
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wow i got in a book..."letters from the soul".
I dont know when its coming coming out...its a longer version of this poem.
I'm really pleased with myself...im in the semi finals for this contest and i may even win first place but being in the semi finals alone at only 15!!!! years old.
Thanx to those who gave support (all 2 of you)
Ark |
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Re: Back to the Salt mines
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by midian on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 03:47:31 PM AEST
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Nice Poem Ste,,,
I can't really see how it is tragic and i guess because i know you can do better i thought that this piece would contain more of your feelings.. but yea well done and congrats about being in a book even though its 6 months l8 lol mwah see ya hun xx |
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