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LIVING DEAD
Contributed by
kittie30
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:24:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Living dead nightwalkers
they will come into your house scarefright till the lastest hour
run run hide under your bed here they come so dont shake your head
pinch me, pinch me, wake me up from this nightmare i shall over come
thats the living dead!!
(PLZ COMMENT ) :)
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Re: LIVING DEAD
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:48:38 PM AEST
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| not too bad, i think the final line could be reworded, but overall its pretty nice. |
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Re: LIVING DEAD
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:25:33 AM AEST
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great poem.. I think that it all flowed pretty well but the last line was not as good as the other lines..
christina |
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