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Woulden't have had sex
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:42:35 PM in AEST
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Wrap me up into your web, then tangle my emotions too,
This lust flowing in my head, Why do I want to **** you?,
Grab a hold of me angrily, pin me up against the wall,
Take my soul so savagely, baby please just take it all,
Release this longing inside, Im not made of glass,
I don't want to have to hide, make this feeling last,
Kiss me and bite my lips, take advantage of this time,
Press your body to my hips, I want to make you mine,
Push me over the edge, then tear apart my innocence,
Leaning over the ledge, break the everlasting silence,
Make me scream and writhe, Love me ever so brutally,
Purity on the edge of a scythe, take away the misery,
Send me into oblivion, unaware of the remaining world,
Then you should listen, bitter feelings have been unfurled,
Look at what we've done, ruined every meaning of devotion,
The battles lost not won, destroyed any loving emotion,
I couldn't over come the feeling, it was just way too strong,
And now there is no healing, to all that we've done wrong,
I can't turn back time now, can't change the wrongful past,
Broken an important vow, But the pleasure didn't last,
Now that it's over and finished, lust now realization,
The feeling now vanished, was once the main attraction,
And now I've ruined my whole life, because I couldn't wait,
I've caused unreasonable strife, which turned into self hate,
If I only knew how I'd feel, and how wrong I truly was,
I'd have known it wasn't real, and hadn't done it just because,
I wish I could have seen clearly, I didn't think it was this complex,
If someone had just warned me, I wouldn't have had sex.
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Re: Woulden't have had sex
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:57:30 PM AEST
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this poem is so true....so good while it's happening but then he leaves you and u regret it for so long afterwards...
SO A NOTE TO THOSE WHO READ THIS!!!
MAKE SURE YOUR READY, AND IT'S SOMEONE YOUR TOTALLY SURE ABOUT!!!
blessed be
sirena
p.s. i think you got the message across greatly
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Re: Woulden't have had sex
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by waos on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:01:09 PM AEST
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That was a very very good write.. I haven't had sex but I understand what you are feeling as I've gone farther than I once planned. I'm very glad you posted that because that is a worthy thing to warn people of...
sex is best saved for marriage...
but to anyone who has had sex (especially you if it's you in that poem), it's not the end... don't continue on that path... just because you screwed up that once doesn't mean you have to continue to do it... there's this term "secondary virginity"... claim it.
congrats on the write... I think I shall have to read it over many times when I am tempted to have sex.
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Re: Woulden't have had sex
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:02:46 PM AEST
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| very good write , but do not dwell on shame if you shall call it that live each day to the fullest forget your past for you will never have another day just liek this one make it your own make it worth remebering:) |
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Re: Woulden't have had sex
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:08:35 PM AEST
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Great write!! Message clearly stated..
This reminds me of what I used to tell my younger sisters..."it wouldn't rot from lack of use.....so wait till you're old and mature enough"
Jenni |
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Re: Woulden't have had sex
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:13:02 PM AEST
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Lust is lust and love is not a handshake, exactly.
Wonderful bit of advice, enjoyed it much.
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Re: Woulden't have had sex
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 11:12:39 AM AEST
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| good job jenni, it really has a message. |
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