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Music - A Cinquain
Contributed by
ramfire
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Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Music
Rhythm beat yes
Makes me want so to dance
Come be my partner on the floor
You're good
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2002-11-07 07:30:00]
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Re: Music - A Cinquain
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by coolsmcniel on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 09:42:09 AM AEST
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| who knew something so short could say so much, love your style. keep it coming |
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Re: Music - A Cinquain
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 10:24:11 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words. I hope I can write something else you'll like. Thank you for the good score.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Music - A Cinquain
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:42:44 PM AEST
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Very pretty write ramfire
I enjoyed this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Music - A Cinquain
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:35:10 PM AEST
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Thank you for such nice words about my poem. Do you like poems about the sea and sailing ships?
Ramfire
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