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My Wish To Be Free
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:20:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Babes I do try my best to explain,
To you my rambling must seem insane,
You come from another world,
I just feel like the weird, alien girl.
It feels like I am little Miss understood,
The way that I think I know is not good,
Negativity & self doubt surround me,
All I want to do is to feel free.
To be free of my fears is for what I wish,
I don’t want depression to be my only dish,
You & I should be so happy & full of joy,
Sometimes I feel like the devils toy.
I want for you to feel that you are loved,
I know that I tend to push & shove,
But I get so scared & don’t want to be hurt,
So I hide away under an angry shirt.
Over the 2 years things have been like a war,
So much has beaten down our door,
But we still stand strong regardless of the struggles,
We will make sense out all of these muddles.
I no longer want to feel all alone,
Need to rebuild the calcium in my bones,
My strength is slowly but surely returning,
Your love is easing my terrible burning.
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pixie
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2004-09-10 12:20:50]
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Re: My Wish To Be Free
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:27:28 PM AEST
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| I really like this. I think it would make a good song. It's deep and has good rhthym. |
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Re: My Wish To Be Free
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by slayer_015 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:40:14 PM AEST
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That is one beautiful poem you got there.
Great work.
Keep writing.
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Brian
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Re: My Wish To Be Free
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:15:46 PM AEST
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Great post, Krissy. You will be free one day and life will be bright and full of love.
Rita |
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Re: My Wish To Be Free
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by screwup on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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this was as always, a great and emotional write... I especially like the last line, it finishes the piece so well. Keep up the good work.
~screwup |
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Re: My Wish To Be Free
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by reprobate on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:07:31 PM AEST
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i agree with the song thought...it's got 'avril l.' written all over it!
thanks, as always, for sharing! |
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