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Traitor
Contributed by
luinil
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:30:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Whom do you serve on the killing field?
In which color do your loyalties lie?
Red stains bone where flesh was peeled
Grey falls gathering clouds in your eye
Brandish a blade of two jagged edges
One for each victim to taste in the night
Follow your orders to truth’s cracking ledges
Let fly the crest for which you choose to fight
Silence your tongue, wear no more lies
Sleep no more traitor, that fault would prove fatal
Who is your master? Whose faith now dies?
Swallow the ruin of your own betrayal.
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-09-10 10:30:12]
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Re: Traitor
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by screwup on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:39:16 AM AEST
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WOW...I really like this one... sound like what I'm going through with an xfriend... thank you for the good write.
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Re: Traitor
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:18:46 PM AEST
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| Wow indeed. I liked it. It's the sad truth how some people betray trust and so forth. We all experience this at one time or another Ihtink. I know I have delt with such people (still am). |
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Re: Traitor
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by shelby on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:29:40 PM AEST
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spoke volumes here yes ppl do suck I know a few of them myself
Michelle |
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Re: Traitor
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by nikkkkki on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:17:31 PM AEST
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| i don't think you could have described traitors any better. awesome! |
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