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Smile
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:29:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Wear your smile paste it on,
hide a life thats going wrong.
Stretch those lips wide and strong,
while inside you cries the sadest song.
Let grief escape through empty tears,
sentimental films and late night beers.
Disguise your damaged bleeding heart,
though inside its torn your world apart.
Hide the debri sweep it all away,
and wear your smile again today.
Copyright ©
x_midnight_x
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2004-09-10 07:29:10]
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Re: Smile
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:31:03 AM AEST
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Sometimes life is so tiring...
Very good poem that expresses it all.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Smile
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:36:57 AM AEST
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Sadness overwhelms sometimes...and it seems to be easier to just hide behind that smile than try to explain thoses feelings.
Awesome poem.. |
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Re: Smile
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by thumper on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:52:41 AM AEST
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So many of us hide behind smiles, when silently we're screaming in pain. You expressed this very succinctly. Great work! Peace to you.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Smile
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by inoc on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:59:01 AM AEST
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I love it love it love it!!!
*smiling *
thank you for the advice wonderful poem!
we can never smile too much
cheers!
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Re: Smile
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by brew on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:10:40 AM AEST
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| Yes..........some have to hide, but really are crying. Hey, be yourself.and it will be ok. Liked the writing....flowed well! |
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Re: Smile
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:03:55 AM AEST
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Great poem, very true of many. Good write.
Corinna |
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