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Sweet Leilani
Contributed by
veramouse
on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:34:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sweet Leilani
Oh my sweet leilani
They have taken you away
The gods needed you more than I
And took you there to stay
We only shared a precious few
Days of passion in the sun
Then you went to be with them
And I am left alone
I pine for you, cant you see
I lived my life for you
I will join you in a few short hours
And bid this world adieu
We will walk the heavenly path again
Just you and I alone
For without you I do not exist
The future is unknown
Oh my sweet leilani
Why did you have to leave?
My heart is broke, an empty shell
All i can do is grieve.
Copyright ©
veramouse
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2004-09-10 06:34:37]
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Re: Sweet Leilani
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:06:10 AM AEST
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This is truly wonderful...like shining tears on heaven's face.
I loved reading this.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Sweet Leilani
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by x_midnight_x on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:47:50 AM AEST
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anyone who has ever loved and lost can relate to this,a beautiful write,
blessings and best wishes,
midnight x |
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Re: Sweet Leilani
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:28:11 PM AEST
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absolutely ~:*gorgeous*:~ poem!! hugs n' love nessa
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