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Pealing Steel

Contributed by Eicherus on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:25:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

A lost temptation
For a touch once bore
An insight of direction
Has denied me to adore
But deserved my position
The betrayal occurred before

Unto the renaissance of motion
emotions were
to soar: for what
from whom
whence forth
all lost, escaped have I to now,
a childish sensitivity,
ridicule concurred,
fair belittlement adhered,
abhorred passion,
lust and the like,
till morrow to hope by feeling more-

A sickened hope,
the virus of love,
nothing to cure,
of antidotes I’ve pleased,
to have taken them all,
the ache is never fleeting,
only seeking a slake,
a momentary lift,
but the desire in emotions found,
is the continuance in their loss,
-Again & again- to be returned, their cyclical path,
then this love is life,
as just and round…

O Life the living over-soul,
never decrease,
the cosmos ever expands,
to condense once more and explode,
the cycle always forming,
the continuance,
to be-fore,
-again & again-
love is only to be lost for now but surly not no more…
The hopelessness of hope insured,
hate & despair,
The renaissance of mind assured,
for long as time permits
-I shall love evermore

Copyright Â© Eicherus ... [ 2004-09-10 04:25:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pealing Steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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Beautiful flowing eruption of emotions!
I loved reading it.

Greetz,
Hur

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