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With out you
Contributed by
kostas_hrisos
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Like the frost digs
The cold into my body
And the wind, so slowly,
Twists it in my flesh…
So the night digs
“Alone” into my mind
and silence, so slowly,
twists it in my soul.
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2002-11-07 05:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: With out you
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 05:22:43 AM AEST (User
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Very strong words for
a short write, I enjoyed it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: With out you
(User Rating: 1 ) by aernby on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 06:31:28 AM AEST (User
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a very good write -- one quibble should the first word be or >As
either way, well done! |
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