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Please release me and let me go............
Contributed by
ravisada
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:12:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Please release me and let me go
So, I will not love you any more
There is a world waiting to love me again
I can live there with out your love any more
Then, I will be freed from my pains and grief's forever
So, I will not feel your love any more
Please release me and let me go
So, I will not love you any more
There is a voice waiting to sing for me again
I can hear without being dancing with you
Then, I will be freed from my sad and sorrow forever
So, I will not hear your voice any more
Please release me and let me go
So, I will not love you any more
There is a heart waiting to love me again
I can love without you being close to me
Then, I will be freed from my suffering and worries forever
So, I will not cry for your love any more
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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Re: Please release me and let me go............
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:08:28 AM AEST
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Sad but said very well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Please release me and let me go............
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by shanarah on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:22:26 AM AEST
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| this is very moving to me, very true. great job! |
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Re: Please release me and let me go............
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 07:39:33 AM AEST
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This poem simply touched my heart... Sometimes it's best to leave, but it simply hurts so much...
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Please release me and let me go............
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by randomguy on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:52:39 PM AEST
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| I love the poem, I cn totall relate to it, it defines well what i am feeling too. |
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Re: Please release me and let me go............
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 06:40:47 AM AEST
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Mmm, this too, touched my heart...
Very painful, yet beautifully expressed..
Amazing, ravi.
~kat |
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