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Hidden
Contributed by
Dion
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Beneath the person lies a being
Below the costume someone's breathing
Windows blocked
Doors locked
Can't reveal the beating
Copyright ©
Dion
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2004-09-09 23:57:45]
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Re: Hidden
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:01:20 AM AEST
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| Short, sweet, powerful. |
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Re: Hidden
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:04:34 AM AEST
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Very powerfull!
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Hidden
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:24:03 AM AEST
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Sadly too much of this is hidden. Great poem!
Rita |
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Re: Hidden
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by MsScissors on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:31:30 AM AEST
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| Astute observation my friend. how difficult. |
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Re: Hidden
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by Silent_Composer on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:56:24 AM AEST
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Short yet it is still a powerful statment, and so true. awsome poem.
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Re: Hidden
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:04:04 AM AEST
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Short poem indeed but it doesn't make it any less of a good write. Very well writen & I enjoyed it, very descriptive & real. Excellent write.
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Re: Hidden
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by Firestarter1038 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:25:41 PM AEST
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| It was short and sweet! I really liked it! |
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