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twitch me once more, with feeling.
Contributed by
chrispywho
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:56:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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caught in a center of rulinngs.
a center of short-lived fantasy.
laying in my bed i had it all mapped out
where I would whisper, where I would shout
where I would pretend to hold myself together,
I would pretend and then I would pout.
what makes a soul fly?
money? sex? drugs?
or a devious twitch around the eye.
trapped on a cold fanny rock.
little to do but to shiver and talk.
and pretend to be cool,
because boys with curly hair surely are not.
I'll remember it, all every last inch
here's to hoping high schoolers do too.
what makes a man cry?
deceit? failure? pain?
lonely looks at a monsoon sky.
will the logic ever act? no
will the lover ever know? I doubt it
will the screen ever admit? odds are low
will the brow remember? I hope so
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Re: twitch me once more, with feeling.
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:06:34 AM AEST
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| Wonderful! This is the kinda stuff I like. Very deep. You have to read it slowly to feel it's emotion. Well done my friend, well done. |
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Re: twitch me once more, with feeling.
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:20:00 AM AEST
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Wooo!!!
Very, very big, deep!
good stuff.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: twitch me once more, with feeling.
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by MsScissors on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:02:44 AM AEST
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| Oh delicious torment... So good. The best thing about a bad day is the poetry. I feel loss and fear, and desperation, grrl I don't understand but I do. |
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Re: twitch me once more, with feeling.
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by MsScissors on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST
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| Oh delicious torment... So good. The best thing about a bad day is the poetry. I feel loss and fear, and desperation, grrl I don't understand but I do. |
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