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Dying Silence
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dying Silence
With tears in my eyes
I want to get away from life
And just finally die
It hasn't been worth it
All of this time
These tears glisten
Like my heart once did
Before it was broken
And never mended
In the silence
I am accepted
In this life
I am living
For nothing
What I hold on to
Is now ending
Before I can let go
Of what's left
To live for
This silence
Is what I live for
The acceptance
Is worth the death
I have to endure
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Re: Dying Silence
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by Chanti on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:40:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful write.. very deep. I read somewhere 'just when you feel like letting go, think of all the reasons youve held on for so long'
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Re: Dying Silence
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by Jeanetta on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:42:40 PM AEST
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| please know. that even in dying, there is life. this poem touched me dearly. |
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Re: Dying Silence
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by waos on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:47:47 PM AEST
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"These tears glisten
Like my heart once did
Before it was broken
And never mended
In the silence
I am accepted"
I love that part.. nice job. i really liked this poem as i have liked your other stuff hun.. keep up the writing, i always look forward to reading yours.
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Re: Dying Silence
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:11:17 PM AEST
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good work loved the last stanza
This silence
Is what I live for
The acceptance
Is worth the death
I have to endure
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Dying Silence
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by afterdark on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:06:30 PM AEST
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Very sad and bitter but well wrote to..I like it.
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Re: Dying Silence
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by JT on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:04:55 PM AEST
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what a write. such a solid final verse. really touched something inside.
-jt- |
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Re: Dying Silence
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by PsykoticDoll on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:54:59 PM AEST
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| I understand completely what you are saying and you express it well. Very, very well done. :) |
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