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247 366
Contributed by
taintedorange21
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:03:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your like sweet chocolate at night
clouds hiding the sun on a day too bright
if i could put my love into one color
it would be damn near close to blinding
i never knew you'd be like stars
to my sky on the darkest of dark nights
i wish i could breathe without knowing
you're the air i need but you are
you're the sugar to my sweet sweet apple pie
and if they asked sweet darling i would never deny
i love you 24/7 but 366 cuz leap year counts too
and everyday counts when it comes to loving you
and i need but dare say
but i will oh i will
your my A to my Z
and if my love were a song
it would ring even on deaf ears
my sweet sweet chocolate
my intoxicating apple pie
my stars in my deep dark night sky
all these things you are
to an unworthy lover such as i
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2004-09-09 22:03:28]
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Re: 247 366
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:29:43 PM AEST
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Great write
for deep dark night
It's good to see some one at home
In a sensual thought I'm not alone
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Re: 247 366
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:55:17 PM AEST
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wow... a great line::
"if i could put my love into one color
it would be damn near close to blinding"
I enjoyed this. thanks for sharing!
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Re: 247 366
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by TedHuggableBare on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:58:02 PM AEST
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| Of course that's the only way to love someone; 24/7 every single day of the year for a lifetime. Nice affectionate set of words. |
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