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Lost Identity
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:35:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Who am I?
This girl I pretend to be
Am I fooling you?
Because I've lost what's underneath
Imaginary tears fall
from an empty hole inside
False smiles mask
everything I have to hide
I hold up this facade
I'm so convincing
I keep going through the motions
playing a part
but nothing penetrates my heart
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
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2004-09-09 21:35:09]
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Re: Lost Identity
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by Jenn2004 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:44:33 PM AEST
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| I feel just like u do, awhile back i put a poem on here called "loss" talking about loosing my self identity. I really liked your poem. |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking. Good write. Thanks for sharing it. Much peace! |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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| interesting write. well you are very good at pretending then =] i have a few writes similar to this, except they were a bit on the more hateful/angry side in a way. great write as usual. =] |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:41:10 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Lost Identity
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:26:17 PM AEST
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ohhhh have i been there...its so hard to find yourself again...but you can do it...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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