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Disintegrated Love
Contributed by
bite_me
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:18:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Deteriorating into black space,
Disappearing, diminishing away,
Dwindling, declining, your invitation,
Decreasing, disintegrating into hell!
My mind has left, and scurried away,
The only thing I live for, has disintegrated,
Your love has left me cold, miserable and dark,
Oppression of loneliness has me blinded!
My weakness’s and depression causes you pain,
It plagues me day and night, it’s devouring,
My feelings towards the world have died,
My heart and mind is empty and distressed!
Hiding in my desolate world of pain and sorrow,
Waiting for you to come and bring me home,
Make my world worth living in again, help me live
For the longer you wait the further I stray and roam!
We shed our skins and change our personalties,
But we are always the same person no matter what,
You do in life, our soul doesn’t change its pure,
But still this emptiness at me it slashes and cuts!
I need to feel human touch before I loose control,
I need to feel your arms and hear your heart beat,
I want to feel the warmth of your lips at night,
Without you here my world is far from complete!
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Re: Disintegrated Love
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:49:17 PM AEST
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| strong write. some things dont go our way for a reason. |
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Re: Disintegrated Love
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:50:13 PM AEST
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| Strong piece, nicely worded, but i dont understand the exlamation marks, seems like its part of a heavy song. keep it up |
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Re: Disintegrated Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:59:19 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem and u express how u feel wonderfully every word in this is filled with raw emotion. hope things get better , i think i no how ur feeling. xxx |
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