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Distant Love
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:09:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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At first we was friends before we was anything else,
What are we now, i keep asking myself,
I guess thats the way love sneaks up on you,
All i want is for my dream to come true,
All i want is to be with you,
Baby youre always on my mind,
this is love i always wanted to find,
I think about the day i will feel your touch,
having your arms around me would mean so much,
cant wait to feel your lips on mine,
I think about that all the time,
You in my thoughts, and youre in my dreams,
cant get you out of my head thats the way it seems,
I know you are so far away,
But I know we will be together one day,
I got you in my heart,
It doesnt matter how far we are apart
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2004-09-09 21:09:41]
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Re: Distant Love
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:15:36 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Jenn..... some of these feelings are experienced even with internet friendships......
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Re: Distant Love
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by bite_me on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:20:22 PM AEST
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Awww thats rly nice!! i love it, yeah i know the exact feeling!.. im pretty much going thru it at the moment :(... thanx for sharing
love ella
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Re: Distant Love
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:48:16 PM AEST
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| oh yeah, I know what this feels like as well... Good writing, thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Distant Love
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by tormentedpixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:22:52 PM AEST
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| Loved it! i know just how u feel! i'm going through it rite now. hehe. great write! ^_^ |
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Re: Distant Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:00:07 AM AEST
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Great write.
it shows the power of the written word that moves one.
A person can destroy or help.
the written word can make one weep, screm, rant, love, smile, long for another.
a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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