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Divine Ignorance
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:34:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you crawled your way under my skin
oh divine ignorance
it's the perfect sin
carving your name into my heart
little did i know you'd tear it apart
leaving me here
bleeding to death
but i wont shed a tear
there's not enough breath
i can't waste my time
on a ******* like you
i can't be naive
theres too much hate for you
oh divine ignorance
where have you gone?
little did i know
i was alone all along
selfish *******
uncaring *****
thinking of you
makes me terribly sick
oh divine ignorance
where have you gone?
little did i know
i was alone all along
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Re: Divine Ignorance
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by JT on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:52:50 PM AEST
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pretty powerful write. seems like there's rage bubbling under the surface that you held back, but still a great write
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Re: Divine Ignorance
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:53:44 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write written extremely well. |
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Re: Divine Ignorance
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:31:36 PM AEST
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Oooh . . . great poem, but the second and third line of this, as well as the last two lines, just blew me away. I love them. The excessive *****s sorta detracted from this a bit, I thought, but to each their own :). Anyhow, nice job.
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Re: Divine Ignorance
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:19:57 PM AEST
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| Aye, good vent. Love the flow to it. |
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Re: Divine Ignorance
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 02:29:56 AM AEST
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| amazing, well done |
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