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You Pt 1
Contributed by
Jeanetta
on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:13:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I see you.
I feel you.
When you touch my heart
My whole world is shattered.
Big things become nothing
and all things become you
My heat beats once...
then once more...
and again
As at once my breath is caught up.
I can't think....
My eyes become heavy.
I can't think.
My body refuses to respond.
I can't think!
What was that you just said?
I try to re-assmeble my thoughts...
feelings...
emotions.
Suddenly everything is new.
New thoughts
feelings
new emotions
What was that you just said?!?
The peices are coming together
Everything is so clear
What I once thought was
Is now no more
I've come to know the truth
Copyright ©
Jeanetta
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2004-09-09 20:13:13]
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Re: You Pt 1
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:14:50 PM AEST
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| i love the flow of this... nicely done * |
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Re: You Pt 1
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:32:02 PM AEST
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Awesome writing!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: You Pt 1
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:26:05 PM AEST
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| well done. i think that i have experienced this feeling before as well... it's always nice when you fall in, it's the coming out we get caught on. |
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