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Snowflake
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Watch me fall out the window
That kid you always ignored
Watch me from so far below
Your attention always whored
I’m just another snowflake
Begging you for attention
Watch me swing so very high
From this lonely light fitting
Watch me stifle as I die
This vague plot starts to thicken
Another brick in the wall
Ignored and soon demolished
Watch me beg for a quick death
While you play on your game boy
Watch me run out of breath
As I state ‘I’m not a toy’
Just a kid begging for death
In this satirical world
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-09-09 18:20:28]
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Re: Snowflake
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:11:07 PM AEST
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Wonderful. This was better than I thought it would be. It said so much in so little of words. Yet.....everyone in this world struggles with feeling worthless at some point in there life. I am a " Manic Depresive" according to doctors and I have been through many things in my life. Maybe some of my poetry may help ease your pain and let you know that you're not the only one out there. Life isn't worthless......if it was then why are you and I here ? Everything and everybody in life has a purpose. I've learned that the hardway. I've attempted suicide many times......almost succeeded......but in the end.......you'll find that you do have a purpose. Don't search for it......it will find you when you least expect it. Everyone has gone through life being rejected.....you're not alone. I was rejected by my own mother.....it hurt a lot......but you have to find the postive in all the bad. Take your sorrows and troubles and give them to GOD. He can make what you carry a lot lighter. But you have to do it for yourself. If you want life to get better, you'll have to make the significant change in your life. So many people in this worl make plans for their life.......while their life just passes on by. Live life for what it is.......learn, be wise and use your knowledge to help someone else. We all get down.......but just take it one day at a time. Somewhere you'll find happiness....whether it be on this world or in heaven. Love and Peace be with you.
ALINA
p.s. You may think that I don't understand.....and I am only 16......but my poetry tells my life.....been through attempted suicide....gangs....drugs....CPS and anything you can imagine....if you need to talk I'm here.
I LOVED THE ART......IT LOOKS LIKE SOMETHING FORM PINK FLOYD......SORRY THIS IS SO LONG. |
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Re: Snowflake
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:14:02 PM AEST
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wonderfully expressed feelings, im sorry your feeling so sad, i hope today is brighter for you, hugs n' love nessa
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