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Always And Forever
Contributed by
screwup
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 04:00:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you picked me up as I fell
and took me under your wing
you saved me from suicide
or so many times it seems
you showed me so many things
like this world just isn't so cold
and when I needed you
you never released your hold
seems that I would be lost without you
no one to tell me that it would be alright
I wouldn't have anyone
no one to tell me good night
to me you are like family
because you love me so much
I wish I lived there
but we always keep in touch
I fell like this is a thank you
for showing that you always cared
you help me through my troubled times
and many of beind scared
you voice is so warm and welcome
on the other line
and it always makes me believe
that everything will be fine
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screwup
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2004-09-09 16:00:13]
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Re: Always And Forever
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 04:04:14 PM AEST
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Yes.....and the perfect name....Always And Forever.......someone I once knew always sighed letters that way.
Thanks for stirring memories.
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Re: Always And Forever
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 04:05:00 PM AEST
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| good write.... |
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Re: Always And Forever
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by Jeanetta on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:05:10 PM AEST
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| true friends and those who care are hard to come by |
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Re: Always And Forever
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by inoc on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:32:53 PM AEST
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a real nice write
'you never released your hold' [I like]
cheers! |
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Re: Always And Forever
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:18:41 PM AEST
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| this kind of reminds me of my death of a soul write. excellent piece. commend you for your strength to live and i commend donna on being there for you among others. |
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Re: Always And Forever
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:29:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful tribute to KidPoet..... I'm glad she's there for you.... we all need that someone special to be there for us at times...
Thanks for sharing this..
Jenni |
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Re: Always And Forever
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:12:59 PM AEST
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Hey babe...
Sorry it has taken me so long to comment...
Thank you... for the tribute...
I'm thankful I can be here for u... when u need a friend... God guided us together for a reason... maybe we'll figure it out someday LOL
Love ya... babe
~Donna~ |
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