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Dead End
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In order for me to start at the beginning I need to learn what is forgiving
I've traveled a road that seemed clearer
Realizing "WRONG WAY" as I drew nearer
The road going Forward somehow went back
With no time to rest I need to find what it is I lack
The door going Forward is somehow locked
The detour road blocked
This is not a bump in the road or a hole in the ground there's no way to enter, no way around
In order to move forward we must look back and gaurantee things be left in the past
To be the person too scared to be
To release that person trapped deep inside of me
TAJ
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2004-09-09 12:33:38]
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Re: Dead End
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 01:12:43 PM AEST
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Excellent write, no never look back, waters all gone by.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Dead End
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:40:37 PM AEST
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press forward crossroads only temporary a great write with lots of hope
Michelle |
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Re: Dead End
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by Eicherus on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:38:56 PM AEST
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i dug it the analogy to the road, "the door" stumbled the flow for me but it's still right good...you still got it...
-ME- |
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Re: Dead End
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by Jenn2004 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:06:31 PM AEST
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| Great Poem, i feel just like you do!!! |
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