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Praying, Dreaming
Contributed by
ml02
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Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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Down on your knees
Begging please
Tears in your eyes
Asking to be spared
Praying
Today
You won't be beat
That he won't drink
And that everything
Will be perfect
Like a dream
You'll be Betsy Davis
Or Marilyn Monroe
And it will all be better
Or so you think.
Copyright ©
ml02
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2002-11-06 16:00:00]
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Re: Praying, Dreaming
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:02:56 PM AEST
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This is cute
I really liked this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Praying, Dreaming
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:48:38 PM AEST
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Very good.
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Re: Praying, Dreaming
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 12:57:31 PM AEST
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| yes sometimes life isnt what we seem,good words here!Christina |
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