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In a Gaze
Contributed by
Eicherus
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:26:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A breath can take from touches grasp,
to regain ground of moments past,
Embody'd eyes, a stareing match,
to proclaim our emotions cast;
In an exhale the floor to swing,
a pendulum moving side to side,
inhale to where time is of no essence,
a selfless practicality our beings be;
And such are moments that become of what we make,
indeed time-grains at limbo see what makes no difference,
nor up no down we flaunt to become a creation of our own;
Hence my words do communicate from what our being emaculates,
the mystery brightend by each gaze past,
from eye to eye as much a spoken mind can find, there alas,
our hearts doust fly...
Copyright ©
Eicherus
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2004-09-09 02:26:56]
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Re: In a Gaze
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:38:36 AM AEST
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a beautiful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: In a Gaze
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:36:18 AM AEST
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I like this.
The flow does seem to break down a little towards the end though.
Otherwise, it is a beautiful poem.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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