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Love
Contributed by
2bruisedandbeaten4you
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:13:07 AM in AEST
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Love
Love to me is the essence of pain/ love is something I will never obtain/ love is something that kills me each day/ love is something that she takes away/ Love is a four letter word/ for death and pain/ love will someday drive me insane/ Love runs quickly from me/ as if it has reason too flee/ but why would love want me/ Why would love want someone as damaged as I/ why want someone so harsh on the eye/ For want of love, sometimes I could die/ love teases me with visions of joy/ and untold pleasures to enjoy/ and then the visions fade and reality starts/ and the pain stabs me straight through the heart/ for I am alone and love is not there/ I am alone and love does not care/ why for love do I have that itch/ for love is a cold, heartless *****.
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Re: Love
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by Silent_Composer on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:31:31 AM AEST
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Each has their own understanding of love, yours is pain, but Why would you want it rule your life?
As the last I read it is still very vivid and emotional, you have an awsome way words words.
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Re: Love
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:08:27 AM AEST
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It's good.
If i would change one thing, i would have given it more line breaks instead of writing it in a big block.
But that's just my personal opinion.
Otherwise, it is a very good write.
Phil xxx
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