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Changing the world
Contributed by
KraZshyt
on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish to be free
Like a blowing breeze
Through the sky and through the trees
Lifting up the leaves and things
Changing the world with the strength it brings
I wish to be free like the ocean
With all it's life encircling me
my waves are my emotions
Sometimes high and sometimes low
but always beautiful
Changing the world with my emotions
I wish to be free like a bird
Flying high and seeing beautiful things
I would change the world with my wings
One of these days I will be as free as
A Blowing breeze
A wavy ocean
A Flying bird
and I will change the world.
Copyright ©
KraZshyt
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2002-11-06 15:30:00]
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Re: Changing the world
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:33:23 PM AEST
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Bravo!! This was beautiful
very heartfelt and inspiring
I enjoyed this alot
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Changing the world
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:51:07 PM AEST
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Very inspiring. Great poem.
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Re: Changing the world
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by lost_word on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:47:39 PM AEST
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great write, very positive and uplifting
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Re: Changing the world
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:53:07 AM AEST
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| very well done. |
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