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Hide Away
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:00:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lock it up
hide it away
can't let it show
can't be afraid
Put on a face
a mask of pretend
can't let you know
I'm hurting again
It's alright
this is it
how I am
don't forget
I can't let it out
can't open up
or else I will risk
getting hurt again
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
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2004-09-08 23:00:16]
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Re: Hide Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:38:48 AM AEST
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I like this. It's short but it works.
You can say alot with only a few words.
I like the style and the flow is good too.
Great write.
Phil xxx |
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Re: Hide Away
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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| It says so much for such a simple poem. I really like it. |
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Re: Hide Away
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by tears_of_blood on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:42:41 PM AEST
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| i like this poem it says lot about every thing well keep your poems coming i like your poems the best |
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