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Picture Perfect
Contributed by
Bruce
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:23:17 PM in AEST
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This very beaufiful lady
who has brought a change in me
Who has brightened up my life
not hard for one to see
Things have been so different
since the day that I met her
Every emotion in my body
is constantly in a stir
I look into her eyes
I see her constant smile
I have a tingly feeling
I am totally beguiled
If someone had ever told me
that feelings like this exist
That I would feel this way
even when not being kissed
I would have looked at them in wonder
and laughed a little bit
Probably laughed a lot harder
until I was forced to quit
It has been a wonderful awakening
and I thank her in my mind
For being as she is
beautiful, gentle and kind
I love this fascinating woman
love her with my heart
I picture perfect woman
a true work of fine art
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-08 22:23:17]
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by arden on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:27:17 PM AEST
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i just love your poems like this. they make me go "awwww" and put a smile to my face.
this was so beautiful and sweet. it shows your love for her so well. almost makes me want to cry. beautiful. great work.
5 stars
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:29:44 PM AEST
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you definently have a masterpeice of beauty in this write.
Very sweet.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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Ahhhh she is truly a picture perfect 'princess'..
Outstanding write....as always
Jenni |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:39:10 PM AEST
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Awwww, Bruce - this is so touching! I'm sure it made her feel 'perfectly wonderful'. I do hope you shared it with her! It is, truly, a beautiful gift to the woman you care for.
Thanks for sharing it with all of us,
SNM |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:15:20 AM AEST
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Bruce once again your words just flowed and created a masterpiece that is perfect warming my heart and soul so lovely
Michelle |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:25:24 AM AEST
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Word perfect. A glorious write.
So very beautiful for the woman you love excellent
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:27:03 AM AEST
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awwww like Becky said your poems also make me just want to go awwwwww, they are always so lovely and very warm
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by thumper on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:38:30 AM AEST
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Great emotion and flow. This lady must be fantastic to inspire you in this manner. Great write. Kudos.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Justalady on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:40:43 PM AEST
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| Words such as these make the heart smile, and every woman wish for such a honor. Truly beautiful not only in words but thought. June |
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