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Like Chocolate
Contributed by
Jeanetta
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You are like that chocolate
sitting on my shelf
beckoning for my injulgence.
Your tast is sweet, yet bitter
Causing a soft moan
As my eyes close
in pure ecstacy found only
In your touch
Your kiss
Your oh-sweet-"oh my God!"
Is my exclamation
As I devour as much of you
As physically possible.
Your love is like that chocolate
sitting on my shelf
beckoning for my indulgence
into the sinful pleasure of it all...
Copyright ©
Jeanetta
... [
2004-09-08 22:12:19]
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Re: Like Chocolate
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:00:26 PM AEST
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oooh. now that was nice. i especially liked the "Your oh-sweet-"oh my God!". part. that was raw. nice work.
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Re: Like Chocolate
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:36:17 PM AEST
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Ahh chocolate.... that sinful ecstasy. How truly that you have created this simile between love and chocolate. Your poem is very provocative and alluring too, written as if th etender cares of a lovers hands or is that the feel o tounge upon chocolate bars...but whatever this is a rather alluring write that doth convey both deisre and laughter perhaps. Nice write. Alluringly nice...Hershey's-ly nice.
"Survey's have shown that the feel of eating chocolate to women is much like sexual ecstasy."(Fun Factlopedia) |
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