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Falling into Sadness
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:28:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Falling into Sadness
This sadness grips me
From underneath
What my heart does keep
Is the sadness inside me
This loneliness
From isolation
Is all I feel
No matter how hard
I try to reach you
I just can't get over it
To feel anything else
You say you understand
But you don't
I've changed too much
For you to recognize
Me anymore
I'm falling farther away
From myself
Falling farther away
Down into this
Personal Hell
No one can save me now
It's all up to me
To stop falling
Eventually
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2004-09-08 21:28:23]
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Re: Falling into Sadness
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by Dragontear27 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:57:07 PM AEST
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| very good poem. sadness is only from time to time just like other emotions you'll be fine in time. |
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Re: Falling into Sadness
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:03:46 PM AEST
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| wish i could help |
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Re: Falling into Sadness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:27:42 AM AEST
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Fall quickly on through it. For on the other side is the happiness you are looking for. Great write.
Rita |
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Re: Falling into Sadness
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:34:46 PM AEST
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| we change right before their very eyes and they still don't get it.......this felt like the spiral into darkness......intense write...... |
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Re: Falling into Sadness
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by tears_of_blood on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:14:47 PM AEST
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| like your poem and dark can only say for a sort time befor the sun comes out again hope it comes soon for you good write |
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