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Separation
Contributed by
mcloysoccer
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:09:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A panoramic view of life
Separation is everywhere
Friends form groups
Separation is inevitable
Someone left out
Separation is present
Who is she?
Separation is written on her face
No one ventures outside their group
Separation prevails
The girl sits quietly
Separation eats at her
Will she be included tomorrow?
Separation will determine
Will tomorrow be different?
Separation says no
No one cares about her
Separation prevails
Someone taps her on the shoulder
Separation is crumbled
She finds friends
Separation is forgotten
Another girl is left out
Will separation again prevail?
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2004-09-08 21:09:02]
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Re: Separation
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:30:53 PM AEST
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| sometimes it does not. this made me think of everyone in school ::sigh:: |
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Re: Separation
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:59:01 PM AEST
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Wonderfully thought provoking, mcloy.
I enjoyed this one. I like poems that can
make me both think AND feel.
~Breezy
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Re: Separation
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:05:16 PM AEST
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Only a smile can tell.
Very good poem, thank you for sharing. |
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