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more than words
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:07:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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eyes full of tears,
seconds to late.
i shared the hands,
and followed fate.
you hear the words,
of what i say.
you responded so slowly,
with such a delay.
you're all torn up,
by the words i say.
i broke your heart,
in a dishonorable way.
i asked for forgivness,
i begged and plead.
nothing come up,
of what you need.
time spent apart,
to well i know.
maybe in time,
your trust will grow.
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Re: more than words
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by brew on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:10:07 PM AEST
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| Saddness..........but love.........keep trying~ |
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Re: more than words
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:26:36 PM AEST
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time tells all.......sometimes we wish we had time back.
Very good write, thanks for sharing. |
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