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It's a twisted world
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:28:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want us to be played out again
Let's have another scene
Once it's picture perfect
You will know what I mean
It's a twisted world
I love you, You love her
So tell me now baby
Who loves who more
Let's count the times
I sat by the phone
At war with myself
So sad I'm alone
You lied to me honey
And it's way too late
To try to convince me
What was or not fate
So leave her like that
Hey, you did it to me
But I won't be your girl on the side
When she doesn't see
It's a twisted world
I love you, You love her
So tell me now baby
Who loves who more
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Re: It's a twisted world
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:40:18 PM AEST
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| hrm if there was a hate category, i think this might fit into it. great write. |
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Re: It's a twisted world
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:46:06 AM AEST
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Not simply hate, I think. Complex feelings; regret, love, confusion, anxiety, hope, rejection, resolution . . .
Well expressed.
Keep writing. |
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Re: It's a twisted world
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:39:21 PM AEST
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ooooo i have been there.....i don't think that question is ever really answered though......mmmmmm it is a twisted world......i like the flow of the words.....the timing.....so leave her like that
Hey , you did it to me
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Re: It's a twisted world
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by Icequeen on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:19:23 AM AEST
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| Yeah, nice write... why do people think they can treat others like that!? |
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Re: It's a twisted world
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:12:56 PM AEST
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| wow you don't need that. there's more man out there |
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