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Someone As Mean
Contributed by
Jilli_bean
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:25:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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i am so confused
and not enthused
of whats all around
i can't control
its lyke i've lost my soul
I just wanna close my eyes
and Realize
Its gone
forget the memories
...Yes , you i despise
right now, for the moment
maybe soon, i'll revise
...I feel the way i do
I can't change that
and neither can you
...Can't make the pain dissapear
or stop my confusion
...make my heart feel not so guilty
Ya, I do love you
well you could
but that would make "it" untrue
LIfes an illusion
So just decide
Because its makin you divide
...Confide
Copyright ©
Jilli_bean
... [
2004-09-08 19:25:35]
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Re: Someone As Mean
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:00:26 PM AEST
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Very interesting the way u write.
Great work!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Someone As Mean
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:26:29 PM AEST
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| interesting. great write. i liked the randomness in this. |
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Re: Someone As Mean
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:49:06 PM AEST
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cool poem
you have a unique style |
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Re: Someone As Mean
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by Silent_Composer on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 02:01:43 AM AEST
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Intriuging style you have, the images you create, and sorrows that pour through, wonderfully done, liked this poem from beginning to end.
~Silence~ |
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