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Find My peace
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Please help me
find my peace
help me see
as I wander
lost in the fog
that has overcome my mind
I walk in a drunken way
trying to find my way
through the fog
which never seems to lift
But as I weave
across and around
the rocky road of my mind
I see a dim light
that seems to get
closer and closer
brighter and brighter
with each shaken step I take
I begin to walk in a straight line
no longer straying from the broken path
The fog is beginning to lift
and now all I have to figure out
is what I think is right
Copyright ©
MnMnMsrcool
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2004-09-08 18:45:38]
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Re: Find My peace
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by Jenn2004 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:45:43 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way all the time!!! |
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Re: Find My peace
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:48:42 PM AEST
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Very good write!
It's powerfull as it shows confussion but then u find the lite.
A masterepice of beauty.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Find My peace
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:49:10 PM AEST
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| your style seems similar to mine, except im more of a rhyme freak. sunny days are to come for the fog. do what you think is right, but consider the consequences =] |
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Re: Find My peace
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by peaceinfear on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:44:39 PM AEST
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| Very Very strong- i like your style :) PEace |
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