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Rising
Contributed by
Phoenix__
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:03:20 PM in AEST
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Set one self a flame
From the ashes born again
Rising to the sky
Copyright ©
Phoenix__
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2004-09-08 17:03:20]
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Re: Rising
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:04:39 PM AEST
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| Again, nicely done. And fitting. |
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Re: Rising
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by Rebecca on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:21:06 PM AEST
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| Very well written. |
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Re: Rising
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:25:39 PM AEST
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| amazing haiku. this has kind of an old english tone to it from the way you arranged the words in the first line. pheonixes have always fascinated me, and its nice to finally see a haiku about one. and youre the 7th person ive seen on this site so far that knows the haiku format. ::applauds:: |
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Re: Rising
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:05:01 PM AEST
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to be a flame......then to be an ash.....and homeward bound.
Thank you for sharing, I liked this much.
Chris |
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Re: Rising
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:49:01 PM AEST
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Wow..amazing haiku.....
well done...
Jenni |
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Re: Rising
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:51:09 AM AEST
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a wonderful haiku, you got some talent
pixie xx |
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Re: Rising
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:38:46 PM AEST
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Do you mean 'one's self' as in yourself? Or is it a singular self, of another talking from the third?
This probably doesn't matter in the end, as you're invariably talking about one's soul here; Suicide (Tibetan Monk stylee), soul-rising . . .
Interesting second submit. I actually prefer Tankas to Haikus - they're longer and provide more scope within structure to snipe the purpose and theme of any one particular concept.
Keep writing and commenting - welcome to YPDC. |
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