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A haiku
Contributed by
Phoenix__
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:00:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Look at her standing
there so tall and confident
as she ignores me
Copyright ©
Phoenix__
... [
2004-09-08 17:00:53]
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Re: A haiku
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:03:28 PM AEST
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| Good write. Few words say so much. |
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Re: A haiku
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:29:41 PM AEST
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i agree with marie on this one. well some things arent as they seem. some things change and some things never do.
well back on topic.... dont you think there is a better title for your poem than "A haiku"? sorry, things like that and untitles just bug me, because it seems like they dont even care enough to name their piece, so why should they care to even write it in the first place? sometimes its hard to find a suitable title, which is understandable, but anything other than untitled is better than that. |
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Re: A haiku
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:31:30 PM AEST
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| I like this alot..it kind of reminds me of myself, not that I intentionally ignore anyone |
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Re: A haiku
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by essab88 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:34:22 PM AEST
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so few words give such a large meaning its amazing
nessa |
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Re: A haiku
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by MsScissors on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:53:03 PM AEST
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| Ha Ha. I'd actually call it senryu, not haiku. |
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Re: A haiku
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:02:19 PM AEST
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yes as though in a dream.
Beautiful, thank you for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: A haiku
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:44:28 PM AEST
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Great haiku..and I have to agree with Essential, I think it was...
Maybe you could have named it, 'Standing Tall' or....something..... but the image I got from it was great
Jenni |
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