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Only Our Love
Contributed by
poetmarie
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The earth
stopped spinning
My heart
stopped beating
All was quiet
no birds, rushing water, wind or rain
Day turned not to
night
Though stars
I did see
Brilliant colors spanned the horizon
as the heavens blushed
Alll the world's treasures
my bounty - so it seemed
Time closed its eyes
and all was serene
Nothing compares to the sweetness
of your breath
The whisper
from your lips
The sun and the moon pale
to your radiance
There is nothing more
save our love
Copyright ©
poetmarie
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2004-09-08 16:12:54]
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Re: Only Our Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by essab88 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:52:25 PM AEST
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| your poem described so many feelings at once. lovely job at putting them all together. personally i loved the part ...as the heavens blushed.... |
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Re: Only Our Love
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by desire on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:08:27 AM AEST
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| the is a beautiful write..you are a great talent......loved it.............desire |
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