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bloodsoaked
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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***** on my soul,
take controll,
abuse me,
just use me,
please exuse me,
while i take the time to cut my self,
then placing the blade back on the shelf,
i love hell,
nothing left of me anymore,
you let me drown ,called me a whore
sparkles in my eyes died,
im weak and dirty inside,
nothing left in this shell,
bloodsoaked towells lay around, my body sprawled out on the ground,
how profound,
the sound of my death rattle...
Copyright ©
blackholesun
... [
2004-09-08 15:12:27]
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Re: bloodsoaked
(User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:46:10 PM AEST
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| I feel the same hurt as you, I think we all do occasionally |
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Re: bloodsoaked
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:49:42 PM AEST
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| what you think of yourself matters more than anyone elses opinions. they do not know you so they have no right to judge you unfairly. interesting and powerful write filled with emotion. |
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Re: bloodsoaked
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by essab88 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:56:40 PM AEST
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| hey everyone vents right? its a great poem that descibes how eveyone feels at one point in time or the other |
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