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Honeyes Lips
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Trouble comes to me with honeyed lips.
Licks me tender, so tender.
Blinded by the taste I fall, drowning
in the sweetness.
Love roars, deafens me, I'm lost in the noise.
Honeyed lips kiss my mouth-invades me
with tongue and wide eyes.
My body opes, yields-heart to open heart.
Honey pours on honey-fills his open mouth.
He drains me of my sweetness; saps me
of my strength.
Then Trouble come to me with honeyed lips.
And blinded by the taste I fall,
Drowning the the sweetness.
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-06 12:00:00]
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 12:25:58 PM AEST
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| How nice of a way to exprees it! I couldnt remember mine!!! Christina |
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 12:55:11 PM AEST
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I made a little mistake on the title of this poem. It is suposed to be "Honeyed Lips". Sorry about that.
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:16:05 PM AEST
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This is so pretty
I enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by penman on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 02:27:08 PM AEST
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| Such sweentess is something too many of us fall for. Nice poem |
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:51:13 AM AEST
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Yes Candice,
at the time ths moment blinds us so much!
I can still now remember mine, my legs felt as though they'd been chopped off and replaced with, I can't think of something wobbly enough to describe how they felt!
Slinkies, I suppose!
Great poem again here, I wish this moment in life could last forever! Maybe life would be difficult living as a jellyfish though! Hehehe
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 02:32:04 AM AEST
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Dean, I think my legs felt more like jello. I think that I would be kind of cool for it to last forever, I'm sure that we could adjust to living as a jellyfish. ;) Thanks for the comment.
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:27:35 AM AEST
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SC, I think perhaps you have to be a woman
to feel like that. |
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Re: Honeyes Lips
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 07:44:52 AM AEST
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Maybe you do have to be a woman to feel that way. Actually no I don't think that you do have to be a woman to feel like this. I think that any body can feel this way.
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