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Walking Through The Park
Contributed by
Bruce
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You Make Me Smile, were the last words that I wrote
I will continue with my story, on a slightly different note
We are walking holding hands, as we stroll through the park
Just enjoying one another, as dawn turns into dark
The time just flying bye, not concerning us at all
Walking Through The Park, beautiful flowers and trees so tall
How wonderful it is, just being there with you
What you have created, a feeling I never knew
How lucky could I be, to have another chance
To be with one so wonderful, enjoying this last dance
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-08 12:12:57]
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:22:53 PM AEST
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Awww Bruce how lovely, :) *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:32:09 PM AEST
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Being with the one you love makes everything around you more beautiful. Very romantic verse Bruce.
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:59:40 PM AEST
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| I agree - very romantic. Have experienced this myself. |
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:23:03 PM AEST
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I love this so pretty Bruce
Michelle |
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:21:47 PM AEST
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so very beautifully written and so very romantic. loved it great job
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:57:50 PM AEST
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| very pretty |
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by arden on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:35:07 PM AEST
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very pretty and loving like always Bruce.
i simply love your writes.
well done.
Becky |
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:11:40 PM AEST
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Aww that was so sweet and lovely
Love sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Walking Through The Park
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by veramouse on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:23:07 AM AEST
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lovely poem,
it conjures up the scent of frangipani
i wonder why?
must have been in another lifetime.
Vera,x |
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