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I love you not!
Contributed by
Opium
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Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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Yes I hate you if that's what you want to know
And all those kisses and roses were just a show
I never loved you, can't you see!
You feel the same way too, you must agree
Remember that we had a good time together
But we can't keep acting like this forever
I lied every time I said "I love you"
Oh and your love wasn't also that true!
The sun will still shine once you're gone my dear
And sweet lovely birds will suddenly reappear
This may be the end of your world, as if i care
Don't you just stand there weeping, giving me that stupid stare!
Just walk away back from where you came
Cause I won't feel any guilt or any shame
I'm just a heartless man with a twisted mind
And I'll make sure that love you shall never find
No I'm not Evil! this is just the real me
I can be sweet like a butterfly and still sting like a bee
You must know that every time I think of you, I laugh out loud
Cause in my sunny days you were one big ugly cloud.
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Re: I love you not!
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by Catterpillar_Girl on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 11:21:12 AM AEST
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| hmmm, very interesting poem... kind of the way i feel about my ex.... good one P. |
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Re: I love you not!
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:22:27 PM AEST
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I'm just going to say
Ouch!! This is beautifully
written with such an expression
of reality! I enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: I love you not!
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:53:19 PM AEST
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| Great poem ... well written! |
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Re: I love you not!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:00:59 PM AEST
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| its good to be honest and show the moody person that u r in this beautiful write , im sure it wont be the "end of her world " coz its not such a loss after when she found out "the real u " |
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Re: I love you not!
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by gina on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:03:22 PM AEST
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| the last comment was by me , i always forget to sign in first :) |
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Re: I love you not!
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by Cutey on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:24:36 AM AEST
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Hmm! that was a great poem i can see you had a tough hard painful thing going on with some one that hurt youvery bad and lie to you i'm truly sorry and hope you find the real love of a womna your looking for.
your friend
Cutey |
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